Saturday, February 23, 2008

T1W7

Mary looked down to the murky lake and smiled. She finally had her revenge. After many years of concocting a perfect plan, she finally made it. She had finally succeeded! Finally she was free, free from all the humility she had suffered because of her, free from the abusing she had suffered from Vivian's beatings.

Vivian was once an impeccable mother that Mary had. However, after the death of her husband, Vivian seemed to go crazy. The once gullible Mary turned into a cunning woman, everyday thinking of how to stop her mother from abusing her. But when she finally did it, she did not exult nor did she cry. She just stood there, and stared into the lake, wondering what she had just done.

1 comment:

JENN JIAXIN said...

hey!i like the kind of style you used.giving the story first then the details later:)hahas.jiayou!