Hundreds of people ran out of the extant, screaming for help. The building was on fire. It was sultry inside the building. Burning debri started flying out of windows, and came crashing down to the ground. Many died. There were more and more vicissitudes as the more and more people were sent to the hospital. Families were lugubrious as they saw their loved ones die in front of them.
No one knew who started the fire. It may be a pesky little child trying to have fun, but accidently started the fire.
1 comment:
Hello!the story started well and ended well.like always, your post is short and sweet.one thing to take note of is that you maye want to describe in more detail how the fire had caused destruction and how were the families of those injured are feeling.you may also want to describe the fire's surroundings.hope you can update your blog as soon as possible.it is commendable to be able to use the five words in such a short paragraph and keep up the good work:D
jihao
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